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Post by Ravǝn. on Nov 5, 2007 21:54:35 GMT -5
name xx;Kiapaw
gender xx; she-cat
clan xx;ThunderClan
rank xx; apprentice
picture/description xx; A fluffy light orange she cat with white tips on her ears and white feet. Her fur is always smooth and soft.Her eyes are a bright teal green and seem to always tell you that it's going to be alright. She has a gourgeous strut and figure, and is one of the most beautiful cats in ThunderClan.
personality xx; She is a very calm and sincere kit who is continually working to help others. She has a great sense of pride when you envoke her she can get really roudy. She is very protective of her friends and will stand by them no matter what. But she has a very strong temper! Even though it takes a while to get to her temper. You defetly dont want to be on her bad side. She doesnt have much compation for people who set themselves up.
history xx; Born to Lightheart and Coldclaw she was the third born in the litter. She was also the most distant to the young couple. When she was a few moons old her parents died of green cough, along with all of her brother and sisters, leaving her alone. Now all she has is her clan and her friends and nothing is going to come in between them. She has a reoccuring dream that will not leave her alone. It's as if her past keeps trying to remind her of something. As if something is waiting or has already happened that is to be feared. Now all she has to do is to wait and find out what else her dreams open up to her.
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Post by Frozen on Nov 8, 2007 7:32:03 GMT -5
Could you add a little more to the personality? Including at least one of her faults. Maybe some more on history too.
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Post by Ravǝn. on Nov 9, 2007 16:10:18 GMT -5
how about now?
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Post by Frozen on Nov 10, 2007 15:57:09 GMT -5
Yep yep, 'tis all fine now. Accepted.
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