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Post by Frozen on Jul 1, 2008 5:18:03 GMT -5
Lightningpaw: That's a lot better, but there is one thing you should change.. "When she gets older she will be a good mother" I know you don't know this, since you haven't read the books, but Med Cat's aren't allowed to have kits. Other than that, great. Accepted by me.. just change that and wait for Mystic's approval Kovu: Nope, 'tis nothing to do with Fallingstar. He hates TwC 'cause when it formed they took half of SC's cats xD
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Post by lightningpaw on Jul 1, 2008 6:12:13 GMT -5
Thanks for telling me that
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Post by nighty! on Jul 1, 2008 13:49:33 GMT -5
Kovu: Nope, 'tis nothing to do with Fallingstar. He hates TwC 'cause when it formed they took half of SC's cats xD Oh I thought it was that she killed a ShadowClan warrior! xD
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Post by Frozen on Jul 1, 2008 13:56:22 GMT -5
Haha, nope, to be honest I don't think he'd really care that much ^^;
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Post by xx; Mystic on Jul 1, 2008 15:40:42 GMT -5
hehe =) looks good lightning
xx; accpeted
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